Procedure Writing

WALHT write a procedure.

Something I learned about writing a procedure is we need to have a goal.

Something I would like to do better is to use  better adverbs.

Here is a photo of my learning.


We are doing hip hop and salsa at dance.
I enjoy dance because we do different moves.
I learned that in salsa when the girls go backwards the boys go forward.


WALHT  Display data in a bar graph.

Something I learned was the x axis is the bottom part and the y axis is the side.
Here is a photo of my learning

My next step is to learn more about different graphs.

Creative Writing - Poem

WALHT  add a twist to our writing.
Here is my poem.

I didn't get to see animals at the Zoo because I'm  scared of all nice animals.
I didn't  see animals at the Zoo because they were all stuck in the swimming pool.
I didn't see Santa because he was not Santa he was Santa's helper.
but I did see my friends.

I didn't go to Malaysia because I didn't have summer clothes.
I didn't get to ride a saber tooth tiger because they're extinct.
I didn't know it was Christmas because I over slept.
but I did go to Hanmer Springs.

I didn't eat a submarine because I can't eat metal.
I didn't eat sushi because I don't like sushi.
I didn't eat lolly's because my mum said no.
but I did eat McDonalds.

Next time I would like to add more humour to my poem.